Pioneer, Go Home! by Richard Powell

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Part of my Florida collection –

Can’t ask for more from a book than a great story, great writing and a consistent tone, in this case, of humor. This is very different than other Richard Powell writings I’ve read before. His knack for humor will have me hunting for anything else he did in the same genre.

The characters are spot on and the setting is well thought out. The story is rather simple, but it’s the interaction of the characters that make this book shine. The first person narrative and dialogue is just incredible. It’s very hard to be consistent with humor. It’s darn hard work just to be funny. Powell achieves the effort with a rash of gold stars.

Making the effort even more difficult is that the narrative is written in a certain dialect throughout. His knowledge of certain terminology involving the dialect is impressive. Some might question how the characters could have come from rural New Jersey with such a dialect, but that’s how Hollywood has managed to stereotype Southerners.

This book was transformed into a film starring Elvis Presley. The adaption is amazingly faithful including the location of the shooting of the film in Yankeetown here in Florida. Practically the entire book is present in the film with most scenes that read straight from the book. The most dramatic change from book to film is swapping the characters coming from New Jersey to Georgia. I guess Hollywood can’t have people from New Jersey seem like bumpkins.

Powell based this book on a story involving a road opening and some problems associated with it. Something not new to Floridians. Powell does swap the Florida name for “Columbiana”, I guess not to make Floridians upset, though it’s clearly in Florida with mentions of “the Glades’ and the like. The book also well describes US 19 at the time.

This is a well written, hilarious book that should be read by anyone wanting a good time!

Botom line: i highly recommend it – IF you can find it! Check your local library.

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Phoenix Rising: Firebase Freedom by William W. Johnstone
My rating: 1 of 5 stars

I went from the first of the series to the second book, this one. The first was disappointing and hoped the second would get the story’s act together and get some teeth in it. It didn’t.

This one really stumbles in the inability of the writer(s) to put a good story together. There was clearly an end and a continuation of the series in mind. What wasn’t focused on was a feeling of care for characters or a depth of story to make the novel worth the time of the reader. Most of the writing just goes through the motions of getting the book done.

Before I started reading any Johnstone book the first of this year, i approached in fear this kind of book would be what I would run into. It very much wasn’t the case. Almost all of the other eleven books I’ve read this year by the Johnstone clan excel in character development and a want to read more about them. This book is the first that meets my fear. I really am surprised it took so long to find a Johnstone book so bad, but I figured I might eventually come across one.

The major problem is that so many characters wear the lone hero label and succeed at their task without hardly an obstacle. None even get hurt in their efforts. Where are those great scenes in the Mountain Man series or Home Invasion where not everyone survives or breaks a leg or takes a bullet?

The most unbelievable scene in all of the Johnstone books I’ve read so far involves a character that goes in to rescue someone in a top government area and runs into about as much trouble as breaking into an unlocked candy store in a desert.

The series goal is to show how Americans can get their country back. Basically this series treats the world as two islands: The ones who took over and the ones who want to bring the country back. It’s easy to ignore the rest of the world, but intellectually dishonest to believe there would be no repercussions to the actions of those who took over. There’s also the issue of how so many were enlisted to become soldiers of those who took over. Where did they come from? Why are they so prevalent in some areas and missing in others? None of this makes sense.

The overall writing is subpar. This book is written more in mind of a comic book than a novel. That’s not all that unusual in a Johnstone book, but it usually fits well into a strong story that’s also present. The writing also goes off on tangents in some areas, specifically of descriptions, then pulls back, such as the rescue scene mentioned above which could have been a real nail biter.

On a side note, i love the patriotic theme. There’s a ribbon of realization that comes over the characters that hey have something to fight for. I love that, but a writer could just as well written a treatise about patriotism.

I certainly am not giving up on the Johnstone clan based on a series book. Since January I’ve acquired more than fifty books of various series. I might even visit the third in this series down the road sometime. There are certainly better books ahead and I look forward to those.

Bottom line: I do not recommend this book.

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Phoenix Rising by William W. Johnstone
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Oh my! Another Johnstone book that’s getting low marks from me. It was just a couple months ago I was wondering if I would find one. This makes about four.

Thee problem in this book is the premise that America could crash and burn so quickly. It completely ignores the economic forces that would not let this happen and the political ocean that would also not let this happen.

It’s a reason I’ve told so many friends not to worry so much about the current president and what they feel is some sort of takeover. It’s possible – though i think extremely unlikely – that Obama has tried some sort of takeover as some suspect. But the actual forces that move our country along would snap into place and stop any attempt like that. It’s the only rope I’ll give to the theorists of a takeover: It might have happened, been stopped and we’ll never know there was even an attempt. As I wrote earlier, i don’t believe this has, or will, happen.

This book is clearly riding the wave of those thinking that Obama is a muslim and is out to doom America. The names have been changed, but the intent is almost as much satire as an action/ adventure story. It’s also clear that the TV/radio fellow depicted is based upon Glenn Beck, who, to a lesser extent than portrayed here, has been very vocal about actions taken and the possible results. His views are grounded in facts. This book takes those views and propels them to melodramatic levels – as this book generally is throughout.

As the takeover business settles, about 250 pages in, the book also starts to settle and become more practically readable. Basically what makes the westerns so good comes into play and the rest of the book is good.

This book is another of the survivalist books that is part of the Johnstone cadre. I’m no fan of science fiction or fantasy. This fits well in the genre, but isn’t packaged that way. It should be.

Despite this review kicking the book around, I’m moving on to Part 2. Hoping the latter part of this book will be found in the second of the series.

Bottom line: I don’t recommend this book.

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Performed at a community event today at Jones High School in Orlando and above is one of the drawings I did. Had fun drawing the werewolf. CAn’t even recall the last time I drew a werewolf.

Below are more drawings I did.

Janice collects elephants and loes to cook and furnish food at family reunions. The elephant’s ear was an artistic tactical issue.

No Questions Asked by Oliver Bleeck

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

A very good and engaging mystery. Thomas does and excellent job of painting the scenes and interacting the characters. The “Go-Between” is very well thought out and the mystery is solid.

This is also a tight book that tells the story with little extraneous scenes. There is one sex scene that seems odd in the context of the rest of the story. Wondering if the publisher pushed for the scene and that it was later added.

The extra characters kind of makes the bad person, or people, an easy choice, though there are a few shifts in the story that keeps the reader guessing and that makes a great mystery.

Bottom line: I recommend it.

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Another of the ongoing comic I’m doing. More still for tomorrow’s post. Since I’m working on it now, I’ll be posting Wednesday’s very soon. 🙂

Aunt Dimity and the Duke by Nancy Atherton
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is the first of the Aunt Dimity series I’ve read and I liked it a lot. The writing is outstanding. The description of setting drape the reader in vivid awareness of the surroundings. The characters are extremely well done with dialogue very well thought out.

The down side to the book are the contrivances of the plot. The main character is quickly drawn as wrapped up in work, leaves from America for England and suddenly, not only does work not matter, it’s not brought up again until the very last pages. The new location for the main character takes her in far too easily and suddenly the character is a sleuth who shrugs it off as something a computer expert could become. All too pat. All too contrived.

I will set that aside only because the excellent writing and the intriguing story line, which is really not all that much of a mystery.

The whole “Aunt Dimity” thing takes up far too much of the book cover considering her involvement in the book. I guess as the series continues “Aunt Dimity” takes a more important role.

I do find it interesting that this is the second book in the series and the supposed main character, “Aunt Dimity”, takes such a small role. The same happened in the last fiction book I read before this in which the second book in that series has it’s main character, Miss Silver, also take a very back seat.

Bottom line: I recommend the book. Enjoy the atmosphere but be warned of a very shaky plot.

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Was at Ocali Days today helping man the Marion County Museum of History booth. The event continues through Sunday at Silver Springs State Park.

After the event I hit the swamp hiking trail in the park and made my way to the connecting Silver River. I made a video, which I will feature separately. As I finished the video Scott Mitchell, Silver River Museum Director, was coming up with a group to take a boat ride on the Silver River to the head springs of the river.

After teh boat ride we all jumped in a trailer to be taken back to the main park. It was late, we traveled slow and discovered deer along the way. i decided to put ink pen to paper and whipped out these nearly contour drawings of various deer we saw. Drawing while the vehicle and the deer were in motion was a challenge!!!

This is part of  larger Happy Birthday card for an old friend. Penciled and inked it while at the annual Ocali Country Days today while tending our Marion County Museum of History and Archaeological booth at Silver Springs State Park.

Wilder Times: The Life of Billy Wilder by Kevin Lally

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I have been savoring this book since this past January. It’s a very fine book that primarily examines the films of Wilder. His personal life is presented at first and then takes a distant back seat through the rest of the book. The bulk of the book carefully looks at all that goes into a Wilder film.

That is what makes this book excellent to me. What stands out more than anything else from this book is the importance of the English language. Wilder fell in love playing with our language. His fun was batting about the words into a one liners and heart-felt dialogue assembled into terrific screenplay.

As I read I kept thinking of the insanity as efforts continue to water down, or dumb down, our language. That and the heavy handed effort to make us learn Spanish. Texting adds to the mess. It’s no wonder we hear the inanity we do in movies, television, music and books today. We should be heralding our ability to communicate, instead of launching backwards to days when men couldn’t communicate each other and used a giant club or fists to make a point. Alas, that seems our fate judging by the blood we see continuing to spill on our streets.

Bottom line: I highly recommend this book to any film buff and to those who wish to better understand the methods of producing humor and outstanding storytelling.

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Journey of the Mountain Man by William W. Johnstone

My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is my sixth go round with Smoke Jensen and friends and it’s familiar territory. Though there are new turns in the story, the foundation is basically the same. Instead of a town in trouble, it’s a range war. A town is still involved and scenes are repeated from the other 5 novels.

As usual the characters carry the story and the strongest parts of the entire book. The characters are well written and distinct. The dialogue is excellent.

Bottom line: I recommend the book.

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