Black Caesar’s Clan : a Florida Mystery Story by Albert Payson Terhune
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I see Terhune’s expertise was dogs. Well, he sure as heck knew Florida at the time of this writing, too. His description of a mangrove swamp is one of the best i’ve read in fiction. He nails all sorts of details and writes of actual locations that existed at the time. Excellent job of portraying Florida around 1920. Pre-Boom.

One error he made was writing of the structure that is the main focus in the book being built during the Seminole War days. First, the overall setting could not have such a structure built and the style of the structure described did not exist at that time.

The story is very good with all sorts of revelations unveiled throughout. It’s mostly well written. Though at times a bit over written and an editor could have trimmed a bit to make it all more solid.

The biggest trouble I found was an odd about face by the main character that was not logical. Especially for the time period. I’d expect as much today. The change didn’t fir the character as had overall written. I believe Terhune got so involved in trying to jolt the reader during a story, this was his 2/3rds of the way through the book jolt. Also one jolt too many.

Despite the ridiculous jolt, the various characters written are really good. The odd representations of “Conchs” is really another error. But the use of the same characters is fascinating.

Bottom line: I recommend this book. 6 out of ten points.

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